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that's her OC gabriella she's a fire warrior
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*jacob-reddinger Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All right. The shading here is a little weird, there's a shadow on the inside of both legs, so, Where's the light coming from??? Only other critique is the hands, they both look a little off, especially the back one. Well done, though!
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I do like your anatomy although her back looks a bit too curved. Her hair is nice though.
Her face does look a bit strange though, her expression is vague and her cheek and jawbone go into a point which looks weird. Also maybe add some detail to where her collarbone is. Collarbone's are a very prominent part of the body and should nearly always be shown. Maybe also add some sharper creases to her skirt to add movement/flow.

I would also suggest putting on a mild background or shadow against the wall, white is a bit too boring and plain.

I hope this helped :)
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~xAlalax Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the critique i'll make sure to give more attention to those remarques in the future ^^
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*JericaWinters Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice action pose. Good job on the woman's anatomy. Looks great. :clap:
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~xAlalax Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx ^^
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~khakhakyouma Aug 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
The mood. Her aggresive eyes expression and pose tell that she's a warrior. I definetly like it.
And the hair colouring is pretty, I like how soft gradient and sharp shades work togeher : >
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